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Reply archia, December 3rd, 2012, 11:30 pm

That's probably not going to be great for his amnesia, Harvey ;)


blankd: Hehe ;)
It's probably coincidence, but I'll keep more of an eye on colour choice ^_^ Thanks for the tips!
Yeah, I never know how to show flashbacks. I just assume the sudden change of scene is obvious enough for people hehe!

Quadrant: Yeah, he probably thought he had a nice tattoo, not that ugly thing xD

WindowMaker: His hair's not wet and plastered on his forehead anymore? That may be why ^_^

Toli B: Who knows? :o
And thank you! I'm just making the colours up, hopefully it will become more instinctive as I get more practice >_<

streetwalker: Squishy's just desperate for clues, I guess, maybe hoping the tattoo would jog his memory ^_^
But yeah, his mistake's a bit funny xD

Shivakigirl: Hmmmm, I wonder ;)
Harvey will definitely help him investigate! ^_^ Poor Harvey ;)
I've only ever stayed in boring hotels ;_; I'll lighten up the colours come daytime!

T8rtoes: Hee! Silly Squishy x)

Anhell: How remiss of Harvey to forget such important work ^_^

Teamyx: Yeah it's cute! 'I've just stuck a fork in the plug socket' hair style :D<3

Nettem: If by 'BL' you mean 'contains gay', then yes, of course, what on earth did you all think I was practising drawing sex for

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Reply blankd, December 3rd, 2012, 11:59 pm

It depends, an example of a sudden change of scene where the reader isn't sure of time would be on this page, does it happen in the past or is it happening currently? The audience doesn't know. Typically, instances of obscuring the chronology of an event is if it directly affects the plot.

I'll use this one as an example and how making chronology clear can affect tone. If cut-to scene happened in the past, it builds intrigue, if it's in the present, it creates tension. Both can have overlap but generally speaking they can lead to very different scenes.

Also I'm not familiar with the "I'll shout you" phrase, did you mean "I'll spot you"?

Reply Cass (Guest), December 4th, 2012, 12:49 am

Wait, doesn't "Crow" have a concussion or something? Wouldn't alcohol be a BAD idea? Maybe give him some Shirley Temples. ~_^

Reply TravestyArt, December 4th, 2012, 12:51 am

HALE?! /stares at last two panels.

>.>

Squishy secretly works for S.H.I.E.L.D. doesn't he...

haha kidding.

Reply T8rtoes, December 4th, 2012, 3:00 am

I feel like I would share his sentiments on the tattoo; What do you mean I don't have a crow on my back? It's just the word? LAME.
He just seems so disappointed that it's not more bad-ass.

Hey Harvey- this guy you just met, yeah the one with the possible head injury? That you found on the side of the ROAD? You're going to buy him drinks. You sir, are a mature, responsible adult...

Reply Toli B, December 4th, 2012, 6:35 am

I'm sure the magic of booze will fix everything :) Don't worry everyone!

Reply SomiJuli, December 4th, 2012, 9:42 am

sweet! so he's got a name of some kind on the back of his neck..and now is going to have a litle to drink..i'm not sure about that combination, but i can't wait to see waht will happen!! and what is this switch in scenery?? oh-ho!

Reply HevilyShuiR, December 4th, 2012, 10:50 am

Squishy is so cute. Like, really. Can I eat him? ;-;

Reply Shivakigirl, December 4th, 2012, 5:04 pm

Hale? Is that Squishy`s name? I prefer Squishy :D So they`re gonna drink? Could they get smashed enough to have sex after????? LOL One track mind... I know...

Reply Phlegmatism, December 4th, 2012, 11:38 pm

HOW DID I MISS ANOTHER UPDATE? /rages

Alcohol sis the number one cure for amnesia, or hadn't you heard? Harvey is clearly a medical professional. XD
My god I love Squishy's hair and eyes in the clearer light <3
My, my, my who could these new creepers be? IT stations and scientific facilities never bode well, man, never. So many question! Namely, could Squishy be this 'Hale' they're referring too? Or was Hale the person who bound Squishy?
I'll be waiting eagerly for the next page >:3